建议先训练“框架式写作”，利用一些连接词理清思路，如：first of all, for a start, in addition… 进而做出取舍，突出闪光点。对内容进行取舍非常很有必要性的，避免文章冗长、论据雷同、突出文章的重点。建议训练孩子加强整篇概念：introduction, body, conclusion, 即中文所说的“总~分~总”，确保文章的完整性。

中式思维

小学生作文表达中式思维过重：学生中文思维能力远远超出其英文表达能力，所以出现错句、断句等现象。不少孩子写作文竟然变成了“中文翻英文”的.过程，脑子里面构思的是中文作文，千方百计把它翻译成英文而已。

建议要培养孩子长期原版阅读习惯，积累词汇和形成英文思维，从而缩短当中转换环节。

基本功不过关

小学生作文单词拼写、语法错误众多：三单错误，时态混乱等等，建议避开雷区，扎实学好基本语法和句式，并养成检查习惯，进而做到下笔无错。

句式单一

小学生作文句式太单一：通篇一种到两种句式，即使没有错误，也很难归类到一等作文行列。

如果孩子年龄小，就只会那两种，如简单静态句或进行时，也建议控制好比例，适时转换。

学英语的作文篇2

"you the best for others, will receive from them the best. your help, the more you get is more also. the more you mean, the more nothing." this is the first time. the reality is this, only those who are willing to help others person would have someone else's respect. i believe you heard the boy's story, he out of a mother to call him very angry, and then, perhaps is hate the fear of punishment, he ran out of the house, to the valley shouted: "i hate you! i hate you!" then came the valley echo: "i hate you! i hate you!" a child is very afraid, ran home to mother said, the valley have a sneaking child to say he hate him. mother take him back to the hillside, and he called out, "i love you, i love you." as the mother of the child said, and this time he has found, there is a very good child in a valley said: "i love you, i love you."

life is like a kind of echo, you send it back to what what you sow, what is what you give to harvest, what will get it. as long as you pay the, harvest. it is no use more words, only this one paragraph, it is true portraiture of helping others: when we help others, we give to others is the love of life, as if to others the tree of life also rouses readers with a clear spring. love is the source of the feelings of an inexhaustible, we pay more, the heart filled with happiness, is stronger. so, help others is not only to offer and harvest.

helping others is the chinese nation long advocate virtue, therefore also presents a respectable example: lei feng, clump other people of flying, and ordinary workers, industrious, pure girl, farmers, and so on. they are in with his actions, their power to help people in need, to go to the warm these people's heart. social prosperity, fewer not between people help each other. many engineering is not a person can complete, it requires a lot of cooperation, help each other, encourage each other, can be a complete success. when we help others, then you are grown old, the joy of a very, very happy. help others are happy.

others get a warm, he got the happiness. is not this "helping others is helping oneself"? remember: to give is getting.

学英语的作文篇3

study has been the indispensable part of our some people,study means to learn knowledge from school,which for others,they believe that study is happening all the time,which is not limited in the regular learning.i believe that if we keep thinking,we are studying.

study brings us the valuable most important thing is critical we are babies,we get to know the world by as we grow up,we will have our own opinion about the world.a plete person will not follow the crowd,who can figure out the truth and fake.

study also brings us a bigger more we read,the farther distance we can reach.a person is easy to be stuck in the current difficulty,but if he can see the beauty of life,he will adjust himself and be positive to life.

学英语的作文篇4

today is my birthday, my father took me to the cake room to buy the cake early in the morning. after a while, we arrived at the cake room, which was ordered by dad himself. the cake read "happy birthday to you". dad took the cake and went home with me happily. when my father and i came home, i saw my mother mysterious, and when she took out a dress from a bag at noon, she said, "son, this dress is for you." my mother took out another watch and gave it to me, and i was so happy. jingling bell, the door rang, and i saw that it was my aunt, grandmother, granddad and aunt. they all brought gifts. i'm so happy to have a cake with everyone.

this is my happy birthday.

学英语的作文篇5

my english friend name is jim .he

is ten , his family in london, he and his family member comes our china to play .

he has a cosin ,he name is qianyu hi is

oniy four years old ,but he has a lot of

questions .look he is pointing at the chopsticks to ask that my this is anything.

i and jim has become the good friend .

several days later jim said that he wanted, he said that i love china .i will forget that you zhou lei, will have free time london to look at me .ok see you jim. see ｙｏｕ．

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